Understand / Critique
I am starting to feel very behind and I am spending way too much time researching so I didn't have a developed design ready by the interim critique class but I got some critique on my rough ideas and some sketches anyway;
- They agreed that the text based designs were the easiest and most effective way of getting across my idea
- Although I was going for a sort of sullen feel they thought the grey was too dull and depressing.
- They suggested using colour but when I explained how every time I did it automatically turned the poster into a Labour poster or a Greens poster they agreed. They then suggested using lots of colours or even using different textures or printing techniques to create definition with white on white which I hadn't thought of before.
- They suggested maybe trying to find a way of using my beehive idea.
